Good sophmore attempt...
...but you need to add variety to the action scenes. The first one was too slow for me.
Good sophmore attempt...
...but you need to add variety to the action scenes. The first one was too slow for me.
Ya I know what you mean. The thing is with this one, I was trying to make it flow into the next one. The next one will be ten times better
Do robots dream of electric sheep?
I don't think the voices are that bad (so-so), and the animation was pretty good. You could have worked on your material, though. For example:
Axl:Say Zero, what's with those gems on your chest?
Zero: I dunno, probably to make me look like a girl...
Axl: Ooh, what's this button do? *presses button on Zero's chest*
*gun barrels shoot out & shoot goo*
Zero: DAMN YOU WILY!!!
That was pretty good suggestion, although this is my least preferred episode in the series anyway, from the written script for the next one it's sounding a lot better and less... Boring.
Ah well, thanks for the review.
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